MalakYaqoot
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Hi
I am writing an online city guid about a city I do visited before
is there any mistake?
this is what I wrote:

The capital of Emirates is Abu Dhabi, a modern city that still manages to retain its traditional culture and heritage. It's the largest city in Emirates with more than 2 million people live there. It is famous because of the beautiful and high towers.

The summer months are so hot. And the winters are cool. The rainy season is from mid-November but it doesn't rain every day, so travel is still possible. The best times to visit are in the spring (April, May) when the weather is not that hot out, or the autumn (October, November ), when it's windy.

*Visit the Sheikh Zayed Grand Mosque, Which can hold 40,000 worshippers.
* Go for a tour in Qasr Al-Hosn, if you like historical buildings!
*Have fun with your family, in Warner Bros World, it's like entering another world.
• Be sure to visit Abu Dhabi towers, like Etihad Towers,wich is near the sea don't miss taking photos from there.

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Respuesta :

wow! i have not seen anyone writing such a good and.. wowww!!!
Yeonjunx

Answer:

Hi, I'm new can I get marked as brainlieser? It would be highly appreciated.

Hope my answer helps :)

lets get into answering your question.

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Explanation:

just some notes:

- make sure to choose more sophicated words {this will help you get higher grades}

- Make sure your paragraphs are in the correct order

- Are your information correct {always ask this question, because you dont want to provide wrong info, but here it seems your info are correct for the most part.